tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3701953980535820211.post7922719807964085876..comments2018-11-22T11:15:19.591+13:00Comments on Chilli @ Kaitaia Intermediate school: Te Kauru Camp (Writing 2nd Draft)blogadmin@paparore.school.nzhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03143695787180994133noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3701953980535820211.post-22702618712172236472018-11-22T11:15:19.591+13:002018-11-22T11:15:19.591+13:00I bet that was one of the best camps ever my advic...I bet that was one of the best camps ever my advice would be to check your spelling otherwise that was great.<br />How long ago did you go on this Camp ?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3701953980535820211.post-89933565421015264422018-11-15T13:34:06.140+13:002018-11-15T13:34:06.140+13:00what a good piece of writing chilli just double c...what a good piece of writing chilli just double check your writing but apart from that nice job (:Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3701953980535820211.post-24171785719287557052018-11-15T13:31:24.248+13:002018-11-15T13:31:24.248+13:00any other ride you went on? that must of been scar...any other ride you went on? that must of been scary. I think I should of gone on the stratoshpere.lyrikhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11010653328335708995noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3701953980535820211.post-8564122133967360512018-11-15T13:28:28.420+13:002018-11-15T13:28:28.420+13:00You eleborated alot on your blog good job.You eleborated alot on your blog good job.Khalia Murrayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07874586476433663806noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3701953980535820211.post-66860552193313214792018-11-09T10:32:23.577+13:002018-11-09T10:32:23.577+13:00If you want to go on to my blog here's the lin...If you want to go on to my blog here's the link https://tssweydep.blogspot.comAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3701953980535820211.post-81595307655167592792018-11-09T10:29:55.022+13:002018-11-09T10:29:55.022+13:00This comment has been removed by the author.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3701953980535820211.post-84040902159782889732018-11-09T10:24:30.820+13:002018-11-09T10:24:30.820+13:00Hi Chilli my name is Sweyde from Tautoro School.I ...Hi Chilli my name is Sweyde from Tautoro School.I went to Rainbows End and it was cool. My favorite ride I like the most is the bumper cars. Because I can bump people over. See you later.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3701953980535820211.post-71138269545495399382018-11-07T13:51:53.212+13:002018-11-07T13:51:53.212+13:00Your reflection of rainbows end was awesome but al...Your reflection of rainbows end was awesome but all you need to add is just a little bit more of writing but besides that you did great.lyrikhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11010653328335708995noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3701953980535820211.post-4097008075018081222018-11-07T13:43:35.301+13:002018-11-07T13:43:35.301+13:00It sounds like you really wanted to go on the stra...It sounds like you really wanted to go on the stratosphere and you finally got to. <br />In the second picture when you are on the stratosphere you look very relaxed and are not worrying about a thing. Dominichttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16049923095824157168noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3701953980535820211.post-43540163680731664592018-11-07T13:42:24.113+13:002018-11-07T13:42:24.113+13:00Great work Chilli remember to re-read your writing...Great work Chilli remember to re-read your writing but all in all you have done a great gob.tekiteahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14022693732637706375noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3701953980535820211.post-67047456082855329102018-11-07T13:41:10.918+13:002018-11-07T13:41:10.918+13:00great job in vocab and coulor for your lettering a...great job in vocab and coulor for your lettering and overall great job<br />william hhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16168543399581507235noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3701953980535820211.post-37377737819145841652018-11-07T13:39:48.220+13:002018-11-07T13:39:48.220+13:00great story chill those are some cool photo too.An...great story chill those are some cool photo too.And the stratosphere was cool.Tawahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12529260899569490180noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3701953980535820211.post-38038254520874591962018-11-07T13:38:02.287+13:002018-11-07T13:38:02.287+13:00A really cool piece of writing that hooked me in, ...A really cool piece of writing that hooked me in, you may want to check your spelling mistakes before you post it though, come comment on my writing:)Stevie Hhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12173912594393094227noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3701953980535820211.post-34312950618630680052018-11-06T13:23:45.700+13:002018-11-06T13:23:45.700+13:00Awesome!! this was so enthusiastic to read!Awesome!! this was so enthusiastic to read!Aanaiahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11739493254748251612noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3701953980535820211.post-67816632707875640922018-11-06T13:23:17.412+13:002018-11-06T13:23:17.412+13:00wow you done great on this peace of writing it'...wow you done great on this peace of writing it's got a few spelling mistakes in it though but still greatRachel Craighttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15683224480004547056noreply@blogger.com